All Comments on 'Road Trip Rogue Ch. 03'

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HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 10 years ago
Well written!

This is becoming a very interesting story, with very short chapters! I'll look for the next chapter! keep them in Loving wives!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i disagree

it is well written but stupid.

greowulfgreowulfover 10 years ago
pleasantly surprised

I glad you took this from an apparent "got your wife" story to an intelligent look at the consequences of cheating. My one request is PLEASE extend the chapters. Not just for my sanity, but also because right niw it sorta looks like you're flying by the seat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
enjoying the story

But wondering if Ozzie will ever get the chance to start motivating them (the other two wives) and what really does he mean they could make them a lot of money (from chapter one). Just wondering. I agree that one page is kind of short. But I'm enjoying reading your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
STORY FILLER

Nothing is wrong with this segment of the work it's simply stagnant. No sex and no passion.

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