All Comments on 'Robert and Clara'

It was nice but it went so fast. It felt like I was on a run away train I could not see the land scape through the window. I just ask that u slow it down alittle.

I liked the quickness and urgency of your story, it increased my breathing and I read on as quickly. The situation rings so true (its like that sometimes), such a great moment caught in words. Thanks for sharing.

This is a great story, I really hope that they end up married. The beginning was a bit awkward - no introduction to the characters whatsoever - but maybe there will be more in further chapters?