by GRStamp
This was really good, especially for a first effort. The sex was hot, but I thught you should have taken your time a little more. I have more to add, but I will say it on the thread you started in the Authors' Hangout.
Good to read something sounding realistic and with alternative people in it. I'm glad it wasn't too long, either.
Ok, that's it. I finally created an account just so I could favourite. Well done.