by GRStamp
Ok, that's it. I finally created an account just so I could favourite. Well done.
Good to read something sounding realistic and with alternative people in it. I'm glad it wasn't too long, either.
This was really good, especially for a first effort. The sex was hot, but I thught you should have taken your time a little more. I have more to add, but I will say it on the thread you started in the Authors' Hangout.