All Comments on 'Room For One More'

your use of language is very interesting. i've never read anything like it here. where do you get all this from? fantastic!

this gave me the right horn!

I could barely tell what U were saying through your poorly crafted 'Poetic' speech. I could barely get an erection from this, because of your language issues. U tried 2 hard 2 B 'sensual' with your language, & not enough with the story. Use plainer speech next time, Please. The IDEA was good, just not well told, is all. Sadly. Ok, I get that most 'porn' lacks subtlety, But thats the main idea, U see. Florid wording does NOT make sexy!