All Comments on 'Roommate Ch. 02'

That was so hot I got light-headed! I need to take a cold shower.

and this is great jerk-off stuff! Keep these stories cummin!

This was a hot chapter but it, like the first one, ended quickly and in a rather odd way. Not a cliffhanger or a natural break. Just a random stop. This is an example where the story would be much better if it weren’t broken into separate chapters. The breaks disrupt a single encounter in a jarring way.