All Comments on 'Roommate Changes Everything Ch. 01'

She is an idiot.

She got a new dick and hopefully her bf kicks her to the curb. A cheater is always a cheater so she isnt worth keeping around.

I like the story alot! I hope that in part 2 there is some cockolding or humiliation of the boyfriend!!! :)

Such a slut...cant get enough of fucking..girls like she always jumps into nearby big fat cock

Continue please

A few typos here and there, and a couple sentences don't make sense, but otherwise an excellent story! Please continue. :)

That actually made me pause and wonder what noise a cannibal would make in general. I reckon you were going for something more along the lines of animalistic noise?

Also, Kyle acts like he has the mentality of a caveman when he 'roared' at her that they weren't finished.

WHY DO WRITER THINK 9 " COCKS ARE GREAT MOST GIRLS WOULD RUN A MILE

Throughout the entire story I had to keep reminding myself that Brodie is a woman, not a man, and that made it difficult to get into storytelling. Also, I second the comment about giant cocks.

I don’t like when the sight of a “big dick” makes a girl’s personality go a 360. It makes the story less believable. Overall good concept and I liked the pace of your story. Enough backstory to get to the mainplot without rushing.