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This filled her with excitement as she realised she was gonna get more. She sucked on hi dick like a lollipop waiting for it to get hard, excited.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoI don’t like when the sight of a “big dick” makes a girl’s personality go a 360. It makes the story less believable. Overall good concept and I liked the pace of your story. Enough backstory to get to the mainplot without rushing.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThroughout the entire story I had to keep reminding myself that Brodie is a woman, not a man, and that made it difficult to get into storytelling. Also, I second the comment about giant cocks.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWHY DO WRITER THINK 9 " COCKS ARE GREAT MOST GIRLS WOULD RUN A MILE
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThat actually made me pause and wonder what noise a cannibal would make in general. I reckon you were going for something more along the lines of animalistic noise?
Also, Kyle acts like he has the mentality of a caveman when he 'roared' at her that they weren't finished.
Anonymousover 9 years agoA few typos here and there, and a couple sentences don't make sense, but otherwise an excellent story! Please continue. :)
