All Comments on 'Roommates Ch. 04'

by Aeli

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Garbage

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Yes!

Yay! You're back! I loved this chapter, nice build-up and lovely descriptions. Cannot wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Erica hookup

I think Erica should have hooked up with Elliot and he should not have called her a whore I think that would have been out of a tender hearted person's character.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Damn that was hot

Good story I was just thing about this the other day because you had not posted in a while. Please continue your story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
lovveee ittt!!!!!!

Amazing. So hot. I love it

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 10 years ago
Hot... but mean.

Doesn't she realize there are feelings involved, at least on his side? Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
MAKE MOOAAAR

Please D:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Need more

Please quench my thirst and bring on another chapter! I've read this four times waiting for a new addition!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
OH MY GOD

that was the hottest thing ever! i just read no. 3 and loved it! you are my hero... i am still moaning. i had the best ogasm ever......

sopharoonessopharoonesover 9 years ago
bravo

i love the power play between erica and alex, i totally get it. i shall keep reading! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
favorite scene is...

.I have read the series a few times while waiting for you to compose additional chapters. My favorite scene continues to be when she walks in on him and he has his laptop running. It is so genuinely awkward and funny, very well written and makes both characters personable. Nicely done!

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