by anorris0812
- yet another fine story! We are really doing well of late. This was a beautifully-told, almost poetic story that had me in its thrall from the first sentence; I think we have a serious contender in our midst and I hope anorris0812 will bring us much more of this quality erotica.
Just one little thing - watch your paragraph lengths; some of them were in danger of becoming word-blocks, and they are always off-putting.
Thank you, welcome to Literotica - it's nice to be the first to say that - and more, please.