All Comments on 'Rosh Hashana Blessing Ch. 02'

is a sick fuck

This "writer" should never, never ever, submit any piece of excrement like this to the website again.

You are a piece of shit!

Besides having no erotic writing ability at all you are a prize schumk! Do not write another chapter to your insane story

i like it

Talk about new year resolutions...Hmmmm, I'm not sure your Rabi would have approved though, had you cared to share that is . What I see is that you attach some Ethnic flavor at the begining; the rest is the usual generic stuff. Had you made it less nasty I would have liked it more (as a humorous piece).

the guy does this stuff, and for what, him? the hedonism here, and turns her into something of a bitch. its the circumastances that are what they, and the distorted motivation is the same, and the unpleasant collateral results... hopefully for them.