All Comments on 'Rough Cut Ch. 19'

This serious was fabulous... I love the rich language and background put into your stories... they are fantastic works of art -- even without the sex bits!!! Wow.

This is just too good. One of the best two or three stories I've ever read here on this sight.

A truly impressive achievement, Des. Not only have you created a unique character in Moe Gafferson, but you've also created a keen sense of place: your 1940s Cinicinnati is as vivid a setting as you ever find in online writing.

Add a complex, intriguing plot, exciting action scenes, colorful secondary characters (especially Nurse Mona!), and page after page of hot sex, and you've got a story that people will be coming back to time and again.

Author, author!

There aren't many stories that you just can't put down, but this was one of them. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every page, start to finish. And not just for the fucking, but that was good too.

Desdmona,

You are a gifted writer. I expect to see you on the best seller list some day. Please keep writing.