Rough Cut Ch. 19

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The silence between them was awkward before Danja spoke up again. “Do you ever see Kitty Winslow?”

“Our paths cross from time-to-time.”

“Are you going to tell her about Peter? You know he really did love her.”

“Nah. What good would come from it?” Moe said. “So she can grieve the rest of her life over something that was never meant to be?”

Danja’s attorney had called for her and she had rushed off. Moe doubted he’d see her again. She hadn’t even said good-bye.

Moe slugged back the shot of bourbon, crumpled up the newspaper, and tossed it in the trashcan.

Maybe he’d go back to bed after all.

The End.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Gifted Writer

Desdmona,

You are a gifted writer. I expect to see you on the best seller list some day. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very entertaining

There aren't many stories that you just can't put down, but this was one of them. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every page, start to finish. And not just for the fucking, but that was good too.

poisoniv1poisoniv1almost 20 years ago
Take a bow, Desdmona

A truly impressive achievement, Des. Not only have you created a unique character in Moe Gafferson, but you've also created a keen sense of place: your 1940s Cinicinnati is as vivid a setting as you ever find in online writing.

Add a complex, intriguing plot, exciting action scenes, colorful secondary characters (especially Nurse Mona!), and page after page of hot sex, and you've got a story that people will be coming back to time and again.

Author, author!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
One of the best ever

This is just too good. One of the best two or three stories I've ever read here on this sight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Incredible!!!

This serious was fabulous... I love the rich language and background put into your stories... they are fantastic works of art -- even without the sex bits!!! Wow.

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