by Texan065
But please, for the technology challenged and those of us who weren't actually there to see this happen - give us a little more background and details for the narrator. I don't even know if he was a blond, brunet or redhead, much less anything else about him!
I did enjoy the story, the way it was told, etc, I just couldn't quite get into it because I was wondering about all those missing details.
I like the elements of control and turning the tables. Hot, hot, hot!
For a first timer you adapted quite well to the situation...
I will say the sex was hot (I like BDSM), but for the narrator to go from being a man just beginning to explore his bisexuality, and noticing other men's bodies, in the morning to a full-scale bondage top by the end of the day strained credibility a bit too much for me. Best, Ken
Nicely done. It does move a bit fast but the dialogue and action are sharp enough!