All Comments on 'Rough Treatment Ch. 01'

Cant wait for part 2. Loved it and now want to see what she comes up with.

Very good writing. This was a very hot piece of literature. There was no cliche overload like is so common in erotic literature. Good job. It really got me off and told a story I wanted to hear.

Continue with your writing. It's hot and this was an awesome story! Had me wet from the word GO. Write another please.