All Comments on 'Roulette'

Kinda made me want my youth back in a weird day dream kinda way. It took me a moment to realize this fantasy was driven by your well crafted tale of consent (on more than one level). I had some fun summers as a youth, minus the time a cop caught my girlfriend and me in the act and made us feel like our lives might be over before finally letting us go. My budding adulthood would have been SO much more fun and less of a waste had we had a more supportive environment. And, this fun yet bizarre story you tell taps into that. Nicely done.

An unusual and interesting story.

Oh, what a different world it would be, if only our communities were as this one!

Thank you for posting this story, I think your writing style is well crafted and you did a great job with this story, please let me know when you are going to post the complimentary story! Hot!!

what fun! i laughed, cheered on the romantic interest and most of all wished i'd grown up in this town. :) good times.

So damned creative I'm downright jealous. So much outstanding content in 2 short pages. How's a guy supposed to compete against that? Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Great story. Not as weird as your last one. I enjoyed it alot.

An imaginative story

Showed great imagination. Truly an enjoyable read.

I told you I loved it. Somehow I could almost picture my own home town and the Moose Lodge down the street from the hardware store. I just couldn't picture the townspeople I grew up with. *shudders* Thanks for the heated story, VM.

enjoyable story. Where was this kind of party when I graduated.