All Comments on 'Roxy's New Life'

by rk4567

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imurddyimurddyover 13 years ago
too bizarre

Too bizarre for my tastes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not bad; could be much better

Nice concept, but you kind of spoiled it with the protagonist just spontaneously bringing her fantasy up out of the blue--and having everybody ready to accept it right then and there. It's all too easy; you need to build up tension to make it somewhat believable.

It would have worked better, perhaps, with Lindsay suggesting it as shock therapy of some kind. Threatening to treat Roxy like a pet in order to break her out of the funk; ignorant of the secret fetish (or maybe not, as the case may be).

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
roxy

I hope you continue the story be interestting how Roxy takes to being bath walked and havign her daughters friends see her has a puppy. Also be onterestting how brother in law acts around the new family puppy when alone. Hope to read about that soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Start

A good basis for an interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great start

Great start of this story I definitely would like to read more of this story make her do many nice new tricks for them all maybe even talk uncle bill in to doing more are getting her ex husband come by and see his daughter's pet !

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