All Comments on 'Royal Flush of Desire'
by Brandybeebee
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 9 years agoJust so you don't make a mistake this dumb again.
Carte de vista is CdV and isn't what you were referring to. A Curriculum Vitae or CV grants a potential employer the potential employee's work history and qualifications.
Enjoy. Please look things up before you try to sound cool but come off as a dummy :)
Anonymousabout 9 years agoEven for fiction this was just awful. Beyond plausibility and the realm of imagination.
Stone_Rhineabout 9 years agoSounds like Mr Slevin is a naughty devil addicted to sex and power. I quite like him, the character you love to hate. Putting the CV hiccup aside, it is well written and could be a good opener for a series.
Poor Luke didn't stand much of a chance with his "Jack the lad" work colleagues and that potent aphrodisiac.
I hope you continue the story. I enjoyed it and found it quite a turn on. :P
Auswoodyabout 9 years agoAn exciting game of poker, mixed with a liberal amount of sex, well written and conceived ;) another exciting story thank you for sharing. i look forward to the follow up of Mr Slevins exciting day with Luke's Wife and the trip home after work. well done 5 stars from this reader. Keep up the good work.
CrissySnowabout 9 years agoStory smells like dudu hole or dudu chimpanzee feeding the baby jaguar on YouTube
LuvCoddlerabout 9 years agoPoker and sex - two games I love lol. Hot story, great as all your stories are. Please never stop writing:)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA pretty good story, just felt would have been more interesting if Luke's Wife wouldn't have been so easily seduced just by the Vial, there should have been some more of seduction and maybe even a bit of Blackmail to make her submit eventually.....
Scott274almost 4 years agoWhy the hell is this rated so high at 4.4!!!!...and why is this in NonConsent/Reluctance? Should be in Mind Control section..
KaraSweet7 months agoWhere is the seduction and the nonconsent or even a little bit of reluctance? It could be a hot story if the wife was less compliant. Especially when the husband just took off her panties as if they were her coat. Do a rewrite and add some drama.
