All Comments on 'Royalty Brought Low Pt. 02'

I'm loving this series!

If I had to make a constructive comment I would say that I feel like she was able to break him just a little too easily. It seemed like he went from defiant macho guy to mindless slave really quickly. But it is your story so you probably have a better idea of where it is headed than I do.

Maybe I'm just being greedy, since I hope to read several more stories about the Queen just completely dominating this poor guy.

Thanks for writing!