All Comments on 'Rub-a-dub-dub'

that was fantastic, i am amazed, now i want to read another installment.........

Now I suddenly feel like a steamy bath...

Well written and playful, I love it!!!!

Two stories in one! And we don't have to pay extra! A brave and origional move, and nicely done. Warm and erotic, very human... God I need a bath!

Mr.Elf...I want you to know that Cummy Bear read this to me. It was wonderful. You do this very well...and I love learnin somethin from the stories...Jessica's 'blow dryin technique' was outstandin ! Can't wait to try it....Should you write more ?...ABSO-FRICGGIN-LUTLEY !!!

No matter how many times I read this, it just always gets to me Blue. Well done, and don't stop now.....

How long has this story been here? I bet you know which part I enjoyed the most! ~wink~

Oh my, Elf! I adore the urgency expressed so well in the story. I was starting to feel exactly the same way myself when Rich broke in...and just when I thought it couldn't get any hotter, it did. Boy, did it get hotter... I want to hear the end of the story, though...and why Jessica sent a tape of herself, and why she wasn't there... More please! xox GG

Very well written. I honestly don't read much erotica but your writing style held my attention. Very nice.