All Comments on 'Running on Sunset Ridge'

I enjoyed reading your first story. I hope you'll be writing many more.

Thank you.

Especially for a first time writer. Keep it up.

Thank you so much for the positive comments. There are more stories to come!

Nicely done! I always click on a story that features running. I particularly enjoyed yours. :-)

I look forward to more from you. I welcome your comments on what I submitted some time ago.

Be well,

Tallrunnerguy

... that you kept swapping 'Tenses'!

Sometimes even in the same sentence, e.g. "She's watching his cock began to extend out to its full erect length."

"She watched as his cock began ..." or "She's watching his cock begin..."

Best I can do is 3*.

Ah yes- well we all try to do our best don't we? Thank you for your input.

So hot and so sexy, can't wait to find out what happens next. Please keep writing!

He had to know that she had seen him since she came back to the cars from behind him. You can always find fault with a story, but the question always is whether or not the reader enjoyed the telling of the tale. I did - 4* worth.