All Comments on 'Running Wild Ch. 01'

:D i want more.

I love ur stories!! they get me hard everytime I read them!!

Good story. Keep up the good work.

This little tale had some potential in its premise but it seemed to really fall apart by the end. By that I mean you set this character up to be sympathetic for the reader in that she has been taken from the one she cares for and been forced to be a sex toy for others. But then you have her go and without a second thought needlessly kill an innocent man simply because he was there when she was hungry. How are we supposed to feel sorry for her or see her as any better than the other vampires?

Still curious what comes next.