by MissPrimrose222
I had a feeling Dani and Ryan would be expecting with twins. Those kids are going to have so muh love from both sides of their family.
I wonder who Zane is dating. He is being all secretative about her, I hope they work out.
Damn girlfriend! That was hotter than Atlanta in July! *fans herself* 5* becuz I couldn't give you 10!!!!!!!! ^^
Dani got a good man and Caleb is a keeper as well. This Issac dude is really keeper? Crystal could be Caleb's one I'd Issac is shady. Twins that is just so precious! More please!
I thought about Isaac and Crystal being together for a long time. He'd made mistakes in his life, but they weren't recent and he was working on becoming a better man. Love happens when it happens and it's not always under the best circumstances, but I felt that Crystal could make a difference for him. As I see it, she did. I kind of had in my head what Isaac's growth was about, but it wasn't part of the narrative of this story. I didn't feel she was the one for Caleb. He has his own path to walk and I might entertain a story for him one day. Thanks for reading and being interested in the characters.
You did not disappoint MissPrimrose. Thank you for cont. the Ryan story...Hopefully it doesn't end until birth of twins, Crystal resolution whether she will marry Isaac or not, Caleb new luv interest,etc. Really can we just cont. on until all the Sinclair men are hitch, lol.
'Hot damn' can't express how hot and sexy this was. So you know you still got more work to do? Looking forward.
WHY do you break the speech up? there is no NEED to hit enter and break it up, kind of makes it hard to follow at times when you think 1 character has finished talking, yet they haven't. You also need to learn the difference between breath and breathe. You always use breath when half the time you should be using breathe.
No wonder my wife nearly raped me after she read this. I think I'll go return the favor. :D
5 HUGE Stars!
WOOOHHHOOOOO MORE PLEASE XD AND PLEASE LET THEIR BE AT LEAST 1 GIRL BABY
I found it interesting that they would go from Florida to Hawaii. I lived in Hawaii and been to Florida, Isn't it kind of redundant?? Palm trees, beautiful oceans, humidity...
Great story so far thanks for sharing it.