All Comments on 'Ryan Ch. 11'

by MissPrimrose222

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SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusover 10 years ago

So pleased to see this series is continuing!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

I had a feeling Dani and Ryan would be expecting with twins. Those kids are going to have so muh love from both sides of their family.

I wonder who Zane is dating. He is being all secretative about her, I hope they work out.

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessover 10 years ago
DAAAYYYUUUMMMMM!!!!

Damn girlfriend! That was hotter than Atlanta in July! *fans herself* 5* becuz I couldn't give you 10!!!!!!!! ^^

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 10 years ago
I love Ryan!!

Dani got a good man and Caleb is a keeper as well. This Issac dude is really keeper? Crystal could be Caleb's one I'd Issac is shady. Twins that is just so precious! More please!

MissPrimrose222MissPrimrose222over 10 years agoAuthor
@ I love Ryan

I thought about Isaac and Crystal being together for a long time. He'd made mistakes in his life, but they weren't recent and he was working on becoming a better man. Love happens when it happens and it's not always under the best circumstances, but I felt that Crystal could make a difference for him. As I see it, she did. I kind of had in my head what Isaac's growth was about, but it wasn't part of the narrative of this story. I didn't feel she was the one for Caleb. He has his own path to walk and I might entertain a story for him one day. Thanks for reading and being interested in the characters.

Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2over 10 years ago
Bravo!!!

You did not disappoint MissPrimrose. Thank you for cont. the Ryan story...Hopefully it doesn't end until birth of twins, Crystal resolution whether she will marry Isaac or not, Caleb new luv interest,etc. Really can we just cont. on until all the Sinclair men are hitch, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
(Uh huh) Told you wasn't finish.

'Hot damn' can't express how hot and sexy this was. So you know you still got more work to do? Looking forward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"Ok, Crystal, that sounds like a plan." "I'll call them tonight. Oh, by the way, we're having a dinner for Ryan's birthday on the thirty first of this month, you're invited. No presents. Ryan insisted, but I've got something for him, the painting I've be

WHY do you break the speech up? there is no NEED to hit enter and break it up, kind of makes it hard to follow at times when you think 1 character has finished talking, yet they haven't. You also need to learn the difference between breath and breathe. You always use breath when half the time you should be using breathe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love

I so love this story, more please !!!!!

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
Wow!

No wonder my wife nearly raped me after she read this. I think I'll go return the favor. :D

5 HUGE Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is a another great read

This was a another great installment thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOOHOO

WOOOHHHOOOOO MORE PLEASE XD AND PLEASE LET THEIR BE AT LEAST 1 GIRL BABY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great

Keep up the good work...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hawaii

I found it interesting that they would go from Florida to Hawaii. I lived in Hawaii and been to Florida, Isn't it kind of redundant?? Palm trees, beautiful oceans, humidity...

Great story so far thanks for sharing it.

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