All Comments on 'S is for Slut, Submission, Semen'

For a first story, it was excellent. Very kinky with an uninhibited submissive female willing to do anything her master wants. But why make him fat? Do you prefer fat men?

Excellent and I hope honest story you are a good submissive slut. Iam getting ready to read the next story and have my submissive slut wife read them. Please e-mail her one slut to another.

F.Mcnasty

very erotic loved it right from the start PLEASE keep writing

Thanks everyone for comments and if you've voted me a '5' a very special thanks.

Try my new revised profile and await my latest submission which should be approved soon!

MMMM...thank you...your story is giving me inspiration on how to be a better submissive slut for my master...can't wait to read the rest!

Just what I could do with - cum round any time for me.

my girl has a lot of mental fantasies that she is just now trying to get out --your writings help her express her desires..thank you for sharing..lets me know what she needs of me...awesome for us all