All Comments on 'Sabrina's Submission Ch. 01'

Second, third, fourth chapters please!!

gyrl just found this story and is already soaked and juicing! aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

After drinking at the bar she would probly have pissed herself by then lol. This should be interesting and reminds me of training by turtle_writes only he trains his wife.

The story's short description mentions Sabrina's introduction to "the life of a sub". The perp demands she become a slave. So the writer draws no distinction between sub and slave; time to leave.

I really liked this one, and thought that the commenter below was being a little petty arguing over semantics, since "submission" does cover slaves as well, whether they like it or not. Check your dictionary, you will find that "submission" is the act of one person giving something to another, and BDSM slaves fall into this category since they freely give the power of decision making and "ownership" of themselves to another person. Since no money has exchanged hands, it is also inaccurate to claim that the brief description was false advertising; if the commenter below really wants to argue over semantics, they should ensure that theirs are correct also. I thought this story was well written and atmospheric, and that the characters had strong individual voices. Ignore the trolls and keep writing! :)

I thought that this would be a hot story about learning to give up control .....instead is yet another story about an abusive psyco asshole with a God complex...I hope this one at least ends up with the girl castraiting or burning him alive ...or chopping up his dick after ripping his asshole raw and blodied with a baseball bat cover in nails....something to even up the score...but I already can tell that she will "love" the way he makes her fell all warm and thingly...yes ...whatever....I will never know....checking out.

I have trouble taking Michael seriously. Every time he speaks I hear the GreatAndPowerfulOz voice. Then I think of the little weasel behind the curtain.

A great read, thank you. I'm off to check out some more of your work :)

Great story. I look forward to the next chapter.

I get that it’s a non consent story but you can’t call it submission when she doesn’t have free will. I’m guessing the story doesn’t end with a fuck you and a suicide because she said she’d rather die than submit. So it’s another jerk with a magic cock and she becomes his adoring slave instead of the reality of a mentally and physically broken woman.