All Comments on 'Sally's Small Breasts'

You killed the story in the first 2 paragraphs by...the...frequent...over...use...of "..." nearly every sentence. 99.9999% are unneeded and can easly be removed without harm to the story.

But seriously, I hope you write a sequel, or chapter 2.

I agree up to a point about the over use of ellipsis, but for me it didn't spoil my enjoyment of your story. (To tell the truth I didn't even notice until I read the comment below)

Hot Stuff, more of the same please but perhaps with more attention to punctuation :)

But you need to learn the difference between VAIN -- which is what you used, and VEIN -- which is what you meant.

I can't wait to read the next part! I love small breasted petite women and this story does it for me!

great story very erotic. I love small breasted. Women and have found them more sensitive. Holly a girl was dating use to cum just by playing with her breast. She never wanted fuck but would give head while I played with her breast. It was a perfect trade. Hope you write more

Clever premise.

Nicely written.

No rushing.

Five stars.