by kingerob
great story very erotic. I love small breasted. Women and have found them more sensitive. Holly a girl was dating use to cum just by playing with her breast. She never wanted fuck but would give head while I played with her breast. It was a perfect trade. Hope you write more
I can't wait to read the next part! I love small breasted petite women and this story does it for me!
But you need to learn the difference between VAIN -- which is what you used, and VEIN -- which is what you meant.
But seriously, I hope you write a sequel, or chapter 2.
I agree up to a point about the over use of ellipsis, but for me it didn't spoil my enjoyment of your story. (To tell the truth I didn't even notice until I read the comment below)
Hot Stuff, more of the same please but perhaps with more attention to punctuation :)
You killed the story in the first 2 paragraphs by...the...frequent...over...use...of "..." nearly every sentence. 99.9999% are unneeded and can easly be removed without harm to the story.