All Comments on 'Salvation Pt. 03'

Please write more this was awesome

nicely written, gz

Megan, Sarah or did he and leah have 2?

Great Story!

Kinda felt like I lost a friend when the story ended. Nice job.

Three chapters for this outstanding story is much too little; it has all the potential to be a great epic. Beautifully written, this story has drama, apocalypse, sorrow, joy, romance, action, and adventure, all tied up together by an excellent author. A great read from beginning to end, this story is deserving of many more chapters.

Tom the rapist, thief, and murderer, gets invited to be a villager, rather than tortured to death over months as deserved? Ugh. I get that life, and this dystopia especially, isn't fair, but that one piece of justice was well within the scope of the characters to enact.

Rarely does one find and read a post-apocalyptic story so well-conceived and well-written. If the author does decide to write again, continuing this great story would be simply marvelous. Five stars.

Please add more to this story