All Comments on 'Sam Falls Even Further From Grace'

Although it doesn't quite live up to the first one. I can't really pinpoint why, but it doesn't.

The reason that it doesn't work is because you did not want to write it in the first place. If you were serious about writing sequels then the first one would have been about only touching and Dan having to rescue Sam from being fucked at the end. The next would end up with her getting fucked, etc. Instead you went staight to the gang bang. It was mostly a shorter version of Jean winning the contract. You did achieve your purpose since you won't hear anymore about sequels, at least for this story.

The first story was incredibly hot, but this one was even better. One of the best "reluctant" stories I've read. I just wish there was a sequel to the sequel.

Your first submission was really good, until you decided to weird out by letting the wife get touched up by other men. I say that as Dan got physically violent in the past with what the wife led herself into with a horny guy more than willing to comply with her stupidity. This story instead of a healing process of rebuilding the trust and love between two people has them flushing themselves down the sewer. Which is exactly where this submission should go.

Rape, a criminal act, and husband participated when not passively allowing it to happen. Would be surprised if suicide is not in boths near future.

simple when there attention was all focused on what was happening to the wife ....go behind the scenes either the bathroom bar back room etc and with just a little toilet paper and some paper towels and a little alcohol start a fire ...im sure they would have stopped when the alarms went oof and when the yall went looking for what hapened and trying to prepare for the fire trucks simply pick up the wife and out the door into your car and home ...do you honestly think they are going to say ...well we were raping this woman and somehow this fire started maybe someone dropped a cigarette ...hopefully all that would have happened would be for the bar to burn down after all a bartender with a dick that big would have to have insurance and if they had been doing this long they would have to figure some hubby would try to kill them sooner or later ..all they would have to worry about was covering it up...they would not want the man or the woman to be found as then every one would know they were rapists bad premise but 50 for effort

Poor Little Cuck Never Got His Creampie. I don't think this has cured his slut wife at all. I expect she will be a little more discreet in the future - as no slut wife wants a cuck wimp husband that won't eat her creampie.

For a good writer, this plot was a disgusting pile of garbage. Why do good writers lower themselves to indulge in this shit?

the Ct. Yankee

commit a double suicide.

Where do they find all the perverts that seem to frequent Literotica. At one time you could read erotic stories that were entertaining. Now all you can read about are idiotic perverts who love to watch their wives get screwed by strangers while they masterbate in glee. It's getting pretty disgusting.

60 year old George

Sorry you fell from grace too.

Oh that's right in your fucked up tiny pee brain only women get raped and love it. I hope one day you fucking get raped like the women in the story and see how forgiving you can be.

If I don't read another of your sick fucking stories it will be soon.

STDs obviously do not excist in this story. All the people in the bar are obviously criminals who do this frequently. And this guy supports it?! The wife would be better off as a professional - either porn or whoring. The remorse of both is all but believable. Not my kind of story; despite the writing skills only a 3* score

I enjoyed it. The second one was a little over the top but enjoyable non-the-less.

The nice thing about these stories is, you can explore fantasies without reality getting in the way. No one farts, no one has a piecce of beef stuck between their teeth. There's no STDs, cold sores, cankers.

I liked how it played out.

A hell of a way for a husband and wife to grow closer. Terrible story.

and really liking the tune, TK U MLJ LV NV

Outstanding story. All the people who say differently or are offended probably should really find a love story only site or perhaps stay out of most of the catagories on this site. It's fantasy people, get a grip. Notice they read it all the way through even though they thought it was garbage.

Seems like they don't have an honest bone in their bodies. Time for a divorce to end this sorry tale.

But written by a stupid dumb asshole who pisses before undoing his diaper. Gawd, what an idiot. Makes an argument for cleansing the herd.

you have to piss sitting down!!! Stop writing your nasty comments you shit head

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY - as somewhat believable & well written. Would like a follow up - maybe at an office party or picnic. THANK YOU

I just couldn't get into.it. Too much of a stretch to even imagine.

I have to comment here because this may be the only time ever that I agree with 26thNC about anything. The first story wasn't credible, exactly, with everything working out so that he could watch his wife cheat no matter who moved where. But it worked as erotic fantasy. I think author did a great job with the original characters, too, making couple's motives believable.

But this sequel is like the third place winner in a contest to write the most over-the-top public gangbang story. One third as much sex would have made story twice as good.

My wife and I had a phase of inviting other men into our bedroom, or theirs, or the lounge, or outside in the carpark. But one night stands out among all the other times she took other men's cocks in her body.

We were in a bar on a quiet night, just us and three guys we had never med at another table. It is a long story but she ended up being taken in all holes by them and the bartender, who had locked the door as it was pretty late. The difference was that she knew I was one of the men fucking her.

All in all, we spent three hours using my wife's body and when we made it home, she was coated in and full of cum and neither of us had any idea of how many orgasms she had enjoyed.

I loved this story as it brought the memories back.

Do you know the old adage: be careful what you wish for?"

I hope they're OK and don't have any regrets

Excellent story, both parts! Thank you.

Magnificent in scope and achievement. Illuminating as well as the epitome of erotica. Kudos, congratulations and my humble thanks. Easily ranks in the top 3 at least at Literotica.

Despite those who have demonstrated timidity, I would suggest that they missed the point.

That being, a person can achieve incredible heights and depths of physical, psychological and emotional ecstacy, when they realize and learn to forsake (within the moment) all morality, all inhibitions, all taboos, restrictions, self-control; baring their soul, their very existence, refusing to deny any limitations, even personal doubts and fears, and literally accepting, revelling in everything done with or to their body and mind. In essence it is a kind of attaining of rapture, the ultimate surrender and experiencing a kind of devastation, of death and a contradictory re-birth as a new person, with an immeasurable capacity for understanding and experiencing life without doubt. It is a level of consciousness, of being, that very few people can comprehend let alone ever ascend; a result worthy of admiration, wishful desire, and jealous disdain of the unattainable and unknown.

While at times portrayed as a technical rape, the process endured is in reality sado-masochistic, which is one of a very few paths to enlightenment - one of the other means is through meditation and yoga; and the most dangerous and least attainable routes is religious faith. (All of which encompass some form of pain, deprivation, knowledge, experience, intellectual focus and openness, determination, agony and ultimately ecstasy and rapture).

The world is an incredible example of the failure of religion (and derivatively morality) in guiding people to enlightment - instead creating legions of manipulated mindless dogmatics, inspired only by fear, acting with violence and hatred toward unbelievers worshipping their own "false" idols and gods. Blind faith alone will never attain the penultimate.

But I digress.

Helluva top story - one of the best!

pathetic

And then he buried her under the roses. The end.

Sick minds. Story virtually sucked

A story based on two weak, hapless and untrustworthy characters is unlikely to prove worthwhile. Not surprisingly, this sequel represents a sad depth of depravity for this author to dredge. No sane and self responsible person would choose either of these characters as a friend, much less an intimate partner.