All Comments on 'Sam Ireson Ch. 02'

You got me all wet! Eagely awaiting Chapter 3 - but take as much time as you need for it to be right. xx

the change in the point of view threw off the feel of the story. the title is SAM IRESON not KRISTA IRESON. with a title like this it should be from his point of view ONLY PERIOD. dumb screwups like this show what a wannabe writer you are. delete chapter two and three and rewrite them from sams point of view.