All Comments on 'Sam Ireson Ch. 02'

the change in the point of view threw off the feel of the story. the title is SAM IRESON not KRISTA IRESON. with a title like this it should be from his point of view ONLY PERIOD. dumb screwups like this show what a wannabe writer you are. delete chapter two and three and rewrite them from sams point of view.

You got me all wet! Eagely awaiting Chapter 3 - but take as much time as you need for it to be right. xx