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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 11 years agoYou might try this thing called "dialog".
It's where your characters in the story actually "speak".
Anonymousover 11 years agoOne Of The Worst
This truly brings "writing" to a new low. Could better be filed under Non-Erotic, but ideally under Total Crap.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI stopped reading after a few paragraphs
The grammatical errors were too much for me.
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