by StryWrter7
Didn't read past the 3rd paragragh and already I knew it shold have been in "gay male".
This story stinks. No real man would stand for this. A shotgun would be so far up Ron and fired he wouldn't know what happened. Mary would be shipped off to a South American whore house just as quickly that is where she belongs. Actually scratch that about Ron, take a peice or barbed wire and tie it around his dick then get him to fuck the wife, that would be more fun than this story. And this story belongs in FETISH OR BDSM there is no loving wife here.
It should have been in BDSM or some other category where I wouldn't have started reading it. You are sneaky StryWrter7 I think you know that even the bdsm crowd doesn't like your little master slave stories. I would take the others commenters shotgun when he finished shoving it up your ass and kill you all over again. You people, those who write and those who read such shit, are sick and need to be exterminated with extreme prejudge If I had my way I would wipe that arrogant smirk off your face with a grinder. ha ha ha ha...I just made a funny...don't you like my funny motherfucker...so fuck your self
"You can be the bread winner, and powerful prosecuting attorney in the business world"
That's not true... A man like him can't be the winner at all.
without normality but with a sordid sick mind you persist in embarrassing yourself as part of your self disrespect for the male humiliation you are addicted to.<P>
Other than that you are in need of a brain scrambling.
You rapist's are all asshole egotist's, worthless filth, but excuse me I am giving filth a bad name by comparison. The words and writing are no help to the degrading garbage, that suffers for content, but then once again I am giving garbage a bad name by comparison. I usually have positive things to say to authors, so eat shit and ___ you know the rest.
Keep on writing, you are very good. Ignore all these bizarre, ignorant comments! Complete mystery why these people have to punish themselves by reading these stories.
Glad I'm not your neighbor, but than I don't live in a trailer park so there's no chance. No, I didn't like this at all.
While reading it I realized that worshipping cock is much more exciting than anything to do with pussy. Now I am going to find a bull for my wife and stop fucking her forever.