All Comments on 'Sandy, Mark and Helen Ch. 07'

Some of the best writing I've encountered even after reading over a thousand stories. Your character development was exqusite making it seem like I've known them for years. The sex scenes were very erotic. I had to quit reading more than once to "go take care of myself." You are almost as good as any author I've read.

The only suggestion is that sometimes, maybe frequently, you talk too much. If you could take out some of the extraneous sentences the story would flow better. It's a minor distraction that I can live with. I think it's just your style . Bravo. Well done.

I enjoyed this series even better than the first 21 part series. Primarily because the husband got sexually involved. Thank you for bringing the scenairo around to a more fair and happy ending for the couple. Keep up the good work. 5stars

....the stuff of envy. Who wouldn't want to be this guy! And, as is kind of rare, a happy ending! Nice! 5*

Nicely wrapped up

I enjoy your story, please continue with the series. A few interesting suggestions: A) invite Helen to enjoy Frank in bed as a surprise (spanking optional). B) Take a family vacation to Virginia (beach) with Frank. C). Maybe invite Frank to join the family and have 2 daughters by him. There are a lot of possibilities for the family. Thanks Syd

p.s. maybe talk about cross breastfeeding the children or how they talk about having multi-parents with others.