by PlayJett
Well written on all three levels. A good story to boot. I've added you to my favorites and will go back and read the rest of your offerings as time allows.
This was an utterly charming story!!! I simply loved it! I certainly hope you continue to write!!! If this is only the beginning, i'd love to see how much better you become as you submit more stories!!!
You've been added to my favorites!
Wonderfully descriptive, very well written and reading it on a cold rainy day after a long and hot summer made me really appreciate the autumnal setting in the park and the cozy times in the cafe. I really enjoyed it and was sad that it was only a short story. Well done! :)