All Comments on 'Sarah's First Spanking'

Awesome story line. Needs someone with more than a quarter of their brain functional to edit it though. Borderline unreadable.

Every time I spank my girlfriend and sub its like the first time all over again. Both of us get turned on to the max. Your story reflects that feeling. Great ...you should write more spanking stories.

I loved reading this, except for all the errors!! please read over it carefully or get an editor, it would make the stories much better!!

But other than the errors, it was VERY HOTT!!!!

Edit. Did you even bother to read it through before submitting it. Potentially a 4 star, giving it a 3.

Check grammar and spelling laughable errors!