All Comments on 'Sarah's New Life Ch. 01'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 9 years ago
Prettty nice, but...

...you need an editor badly.

PolyLvrPolyLvrover 9 years ago
This shows great promise.

But, what Larry said.

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

is this going to be a lesbian love story or is sarah going to turn into a slut?and why does the ex husband get to say where the son lives if he was 16 when they got married and now 10 yrs later he still tells his son where to live?any parent that chooses anybody else over their blood family needs to be kneecapped at the shoulders any way

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