All Comments on 'Sarah's Submission Ch. 01'

It's not everybody who can make a popular 'scenario' pop to vivid and fresh life but this story really has it! Sarah's on-edge, lonely and frustrated need for release is communicated like a desperate itch; the anonymous, music-fueled abandon in the club, the dangerous pleasures of submission to a stranger, and now the realization that she's in for a host of extracurriculars-- all these things are passionately realized in this story and are worth savoring!

I went and *peeked* at "Teacher's Pet" but I want to pace myself and savor this! This is very yummy and I hope the writing will be as savorable for you as I feel it will be for your patient readers. Many thanks!

great so far, can see alot of possibilities going forward

Very nice start. I'm looking forward to seeing how this and Tish's other story will dovetail.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it hit very close to home for me, will look forward to the next part!

i didnt know you were writting about sarah. Tish had become my favorite female domme i had read teachers pet and was waiting for that story to continue. but this is good too, really loved it and cant wait to read more about Maam Tish.

A nice start to what is already a very erotic story.

Tish is getting her peats all lined up. the story was exciting and hot. cant wait to see what Tish has mind for her

This is amazing!