All Comments on 'Sarah's Visit to London'

But she lies there like a dead fish. She may 'feel' what he does to her, but she does nothing to respond. Sad.

Other than Bobbitize the creep

I thought this was an incredibly hot encounter. I could feel his overwhelming desire for Sarah. It's in the non-consent/reluctance category, and I presume it's there because Sarah isn't quite expecting this intense sexual encounter to happen. With his dominant personality and desire, he takes control of the situation and takes possession of her. In that context, then, it makes sense that she may seem a passive participant. I also kept in mind that she had just had an overnight flight from the States to the UK, so she's naturally a bit low on energy.

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I hope you will write more - this story is incredibly hot.

You are very sensitive and you see much. Keep writing please!

I really like this one.

I like your writing but dont believe this is in the correct category.