All Comments on 'Sarah's Visit to London'

I like your writing but dont believe this is in the correct category.

I really like this one.

You are very sensitive and you see much. Keep writing please!

I thought this was an incredibly hot encounter. I could feel his overwhelming desire for Sarah. It's in the non-consent/reluctance category, and I presume it's there because Sarah isn't quite expecting this intense sexual encounter to happen. With his dominant personality and desire, he takes control of the situation and takes possession of her. In that context, then, it makes sense that she may seem a passive participant. I also kept in mind that she had just had an overnight flight from the States to the UK, so she's naturally a bit low on energy.

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I hope you will write more - this story is incredibly hot.

Other than Bobbitize the creep

But she lies there like a dead fish. She may 'feel' what he does to her, but she does nothing to respond. Sad.