All Comments on 'Sated'

Pretty good vignette. No context, however. Just two generic lovers. But this could be a good scene in a larger story. I like reading a woman's perspective. So dirty!

The story is well written. I didn't see any proofing errors, unusual for new and even many well-established authors. But there's little substance to the story. No plot or character development. I do want to see where the author goes from here.

Thanks for your reads and your comments. Appreciate your interest and input. ♡

Good read and what a start.

Maybe writing in the third person would allow you to elaborate on the narrative more, or writing in the past tense in the first person.

Really hot story though, love the passion. It was so dirty and horny, I got off on it.

Thanks Bobby. Past/first would work, if I can only find the courage. :)

Thank you for sharing this very well written story. I found it to be most erotic and a fun read. I am looking forward to your next post. ;)

Very glad you enjoyed the story, Ducky7 and Seacoastcouple. Thank you... Catharyn

Well titled.

Leseelooovespeter.

This is a very hot scene! I hope you'll keep going.

Thanks, Walkerlong. Appreciate your encouragement.

only ones imagination, TK U MLJ LV NV

Thank you for reading my work.

Cat