All Comments on 'Say You're Sorry'

but for me it needs more. What about Vicki? What happened? Sorry my imagination is running in circles. The story is well written and I can feel the hurt, sadness, and anger of the characters.

Thanks for the hard work and keep writing.

Woodmanone

I hate when readers do this, because I know how hard writing is because I've written a few stories. But please write more. The story ended so quickly. UG!

just dummy up, take the beating and hope for a new start, TK U MLJ LV NV

Violent but still cute lots of slaps.

Agree, it is a well written flash story, but could be much more with a few more chapters. This was so short that it could serve as an introductory chapter and then we get to find out all about why we read this scene. You captured the emotions well and the slaps were almost felt, yet even as she was beating on him I had a feeling she was just venting because of her love.

I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

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