All Comments on 'Scary Summer Ch. 01'

nice story hope to read more!

im not too much into forced sex and even less into blackmail. her sis is a real loser! personally id taken the pipe from her and smacked her in the face and told her to mind her fucking business! but thats just me.

...I'm guessing that English isn't your Major. You don't write very well.

Not exactly my idea of a good story, but I guess it was alright for the most part. Certain things I'd have done differently as a writer.