All Comments on 'Scenes from a Mall'

I liked this story and wish that I had been opne of the spectators on the day, or at least using the toilets when she came out of them!

I could really get into "people watching" - if they were anything like these two in your story! Oh, and I would save alot of money, too, 'cause I would forget what I was there to buy!

You have a knack for the unique in your writing - and I anxiously await the rest of your erotic portfolio to hit our new stories list!

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"The Vixxx"

Great story, well written and very horny. I wish I'd been at the mall that day!

A good hot story...please write more.