All Comments on 'Scent of the Wolf'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
brilliant

i love reading erotic stories,but this is the best i have read,my adreniline was pumping so fast i could almost feel the womens orgasams

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A Masterpiece!

Best I have ever read....Ending had you wanting more! Not stop reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great! Sizzling story!

One of the best non-human stories I read... and the scene of the two girls... is one of the best lesbian scenes! Keep it up!

DarthGatorDarthGatorabout 19 years ago
Well Struck!

Well conceived, well executed, and very erotic. A pleasure to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
VERY VERY GOOD STROKE STORY... writererotica

But why didn't the werewolf fuck and impregnate the lesbians?

Please add that episode to a later chapter.

ChevyGirl67ChevyGirl67almost 19 years ago
Nice story.

You did a great job. I also have seen the Dark Wolf movie, and I in turn was inspired, but I havn't finished a werewolf based story yet. I thought it would have been a great movie if they had better graphics and acting, but as you said, it was a low budget film...Anyway, I just wanted you to know I liked your story. C-ya'! ; )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
give us more of this story,i loved it.

tell us more of his time in his country and the women he seduces.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad.

Interesting idea, and written fairly well. Next time you include something in a foreign language, though, check with someone who speaks it - what Michael's father tells him after releasing him is "<b>L'eau de cologne</b> <i>(the perfume, *not* the town)</i>, <b>c'est votre</b> <i>(formal/official "your", normally used between distant acquaintances or by a child to an elder)</i> <b>maison</b> <i>(house, *not* home)</i>, <b>Michael</b>". It's a small detail, but really takes a reader out of the story if it's spotted.<br><br>

French doesn't have an exact parallel for the English "home", AFAIK; you could say "Cologne, c'est ton pays, Michel". ("Michel" is the french version of Michael - pronounced as "Michelle" is in English - just giving it here for reference, keeping the English name might make more sense. "Pays" is similar to the metaphorical use of "land" in English, i.e. "his native land", and can be used to refer to anything from a village to a country depending on context.)

firecracker424firecracker424about 13 years ago
awsome

loved the story greatly enjoyed the detail that you put into it. i'd like to see where michael an his sister end up. keep up the good work

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 7 years ago

would like to read more like this

redlion75redlion7511 months ago

So his family and dr knew what was wrong with him but tried to convince him that it was all in his head? Then want him to join them?

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2021: Still around. About me: Divorced for 14+ years. Well-adjusted, 50something, educated professional with 2 great emotionally healthy adult kids. I've always been drawn to taboo sex, particularly adult, consensual family fantasies or experiences. I like stories/experie...