by writerotica
i love reading erotic stories,but this is the best i have read,my adreniline was pumping so fast i could almost feel the womens orgasams
Best I have ever read....Ending had you wanting more! Not stop reading!
One of the best non-human stories I read... and the scene of the two girls... is one of the best lesbian scenes! Keep it up!
Well conceived, well executed, and very erotic. A pleasure to read.
But why didn't the werewolf fuck and impregnate the lesbians?
Please add that episode to a later chapter.
You did a great job. I also have seen the Dark Wolf movie, and I in turn was inspired, but I havn't finished a werewolf based story yet. I thought it would have been a great movie if they had better graphics and acting, but as you said, it was a low budget film...Anyway, I just wanted you to know I liked your story. C-ya'! ; )
tell us more of his time in his country and the women he seduces.
Interesting idea, and written fairly well. Next time you include something in a foreign language, though, check with someone who speaks it - what Michael's father tells him after releasing him is "<b>L'eau de cologne</b> <i>(the perfume, *not* the town)</i>, <b>c'est votre</b> <i>(formal/official "your", normally used between distant acquaintances or by a child to an elder)</i> <b>maison</b> <i>(house, *not* home)</i>, <b>Michael</b>". It's a small detail, but really takes a reader out of the story if it's spotted.<br><br>
French doesn't have an exact parallel for the English "home", AFAIK; you could say "Cologne, c'est ton pays, Michel". ("Michel" is the french version of Michael - pronounced as "Michelle" is in English - just giving it here for reference, keeping the English name might make more sense. "Pays" is similar to the metaphorical use of "land" in English, i.e. "his native land", and can be used to refer to anything from a village to a country depending on context.)
loved the story greatly enjoyed the detail that you put into it. i'd like to see where michael an his sister end up. keep up the good work
So his family and dr knew what was wrong with him but tried to convince him that it was all in his head? Then want him to join them?