by Fantasychick
I NEED MORE!!!!!!! Shaping up to be great, but it needs more! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU!
DAMIT!Just as i finish and hungry for more, i relize, THERE IS NO SEQULE. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Interesting first chapter, though it could use some fleshing out. Worth coming back to if you continue with the series.
I really want to know what happens next. Please post the next chapter soon.
this is interesting. it has been 4 months. where is the next chapter?? hmmmm
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see where this is all going. Great start. Hope to read more very soon!
I am actually very curious to see what happens next. I wish you didnt make this chapter this short. Well hopefully you post the next chapter asap. Goodluck.
That was a really amazing first chapter! Can't wait for Chapter 2. Love the writing!