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by skip.69

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DanaQtDanaQtover 19 years ago
Great work!

I love how detailed you are. I'm sure you thought this was long but I wanted it longer :-)

Ah, I wanted MORE!!

As I can see, there were no run on sentences which is great. The only thing I noticed was some extra comma use that I think you could've left out. Other than that, fantastic, my dear!

Where's the 4 in a half?

2lips4u2lips4uover 19 years ago
Hmmmm Will there be summer school?

Love your openness and style of writing. Still wet darling....

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Freewheeling Animalistic Behavior at its best!

We need more, and more, and more. Is anyone going to get preggie?

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