All Comments on 'Scott and Veronica First Meet'

Good story, pacing was great. Could have used an editor though.

This story was half-baked. It had a fairly decent setup, but moved way too quickly, with no character development.

People who have just come together do not normally agree to marry right away.

And he was "berried" in her? Like, raspberries? (That was my reaction.)

Needs a rewrite and an editor.