by Sachs
Your writing is excellent. I related with the characters, loved the setting, decriptions, and especially the friendship aspect of their relationship.
You must have written plenty of other stories in your time.
Submit more!!!
I'm a straight chick, too, and I can't wait for the next story!
I loved the pacing,,,very erotic,,,and very believable. I can't wait for the rest.
Mmm, I love these boys already. You get inside their heads (and pants) so deliciously that I can't wait to check out more.
xx. Sadie