All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
KUDO's Author

Vibrant - flowing - sensual - explorative - and with respect - nice - no- very nice work author!

ericahopeericahopeover 15 years ago
Well done

I liked Part 2 as well. It definitely got my pulse up and I loved the idea of Sarah losing some of her shyness. I can picture myself in a similar situation. And I loved how he pressed her up against the door.

Again, an editor would help too.

richboiserichboiseover 12 years ago
Beautiful

Beautiful story from a beautiful woman. More please.

Richard

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